HappyEnglishLand
-Lauren Cole
My first reaction to the idea of reading a book
about Zombies must have been something like, "Cool!"
followed immediately by "Ive gotta tell
Jason [a friend of mine who owns "The Zombie
Survival Guide," and intensely believes that he
will need to use it any day now] about this!" I
was excited about the prospect of a good read, and World
War Z has not let me down.
The first thing I noticed about the book was
Brooks amazing affinity for effectively
descriptive prose. For example, heres an
excerpt I especially liked:
"Anyone left alive will either
have the air sucked right out of their longs, or
and theyll never admit this to anyone
have their lungs ripped right out of their
mouth. Obviously no ones going to live long
enough to tell that kind of horror story, probably
why the Pentagons been so good at covering up
the truth, but if you ever see a picture of a G, or
ever an example of a real walking specimen, and
hes got both air bags and windpipes just
dangling out of his lips, make sure you give him my
number. Im always up for meeting another
veteran of Yonkers." (WWZ, page 104)
As this passage illustrates, Brooks possesses
great descriptive talent. All you need to know is
given by that paragraph. You "get the picture"
of what he is saying. Yet, hes not drenching
the paragraph with a sea of metaphors. He simply
doesnt need to. The above paragraph is a
perfect description without being "flowery."
As a writer, I can truly appreciate this fine balance
between including enough details to draw your
audience into your alternate universe, and avoiding a
tendency to become mundane or worse, to sound
over-the-top and make your audience laugh where they
were supposed to cry! For instance, Brooks could have
said "Anyone left alive will die a tragic death,
watching as the very breath of their lungs is ripped
away, like the painful waxing of hairs from tender
flesh," but this would have almost made me
giggle. His straightforward manner, then, is much
better suited to the oral history narrative of a
world stricken by war that he is telling.
I expected World War Z to draw me into such
a world, one taken over by zombies and worldwide fear,
so I had the "general feel" of the book
right, but there were a couple of things I
didnt expect. First, I didnt expect there
to be multiple speakers for some reason I
expected one man to tell his experience of the war
from beginning to end. Now that I have read a fair
amount of the book, I can see that this take on a war
chronicle simply wouldnt work. Its a world
war, and for a world war to be understood, one
needs to gain a world perspective. The
interview format of the novel lends itself nicely to
this purpose, for the audience is able to understand
a number of things that an individual would not be
able to portray. An individual is unable to be in
several places at once, and so interviewing people
from around the world enables the audience to see the
war from several simultaneous perspectives. This
gives them the "international flavor," or
the circumstances that helped or hindered different
nations, and the peoples responses. We are able
to see common threads like fear, and dread, and
desperation, but also differences in how different
places handled the problem. For instance, some tried
to get out via interstates, and failed simply to lack
of organization, while in other countries, armies
wiped out innocent and uninfected people in a
desperate attempt to eradicate (or at least locate)
the plague. So, needless to say, I enjoyed reading
the variety of perspectives, despite the fact that I
initially thought this would be confusing. To the
contrary, it was entirely enlightening.
Another aspect of the book that I did not expect
was the immense volume of political parallels to our
current situation. I was blown away by the implicit
sociopolitical commentary that is embedded so deep in
Brooks work. For instance, take a look at this
line from page eighty-six: "He didnt just
want to ride out the storm in comfort and luxury, he
wanted every to know hed done it. That
was the celebrity angle, his way of ensuring high-profile."
This type of commentary drew me in even further, for
I am certainly politically opinionated, and I enjoyed
seeing these ideas portrayed in unexpected ways
surrounding the idea of a zombie war. I was in fact
pleasantly surprised by how fast I found myself
tearing through the novel. (When I first saw that I
had to read over a hundred pages in two days, I was not
excited, but the succulence of the novel proved
to outweigh the length of the readings!)
An obvious assumption one would tend to make about
a zombie novel would be that it should be scary. I
didnt really expect to be afraid, and for the
most part I havent been. However, there has
been the occasional passage which preys on human
emotions so well that I was simply terrified! The
first incidence of this was on page sixty-six where
Mary Jo Miller is describing the zombies
entrance to her living room:
"He [her son] was looking past
me, at the glass sliding door that led to the
backyard. I turned just in time to see it shatter. It
was about five foot ten, slumped, narrow shoulders
with this puffy, wagging belly. It wasnt
wearing a shoulders and bulging arms. The window was
broken and it had Jenna by the hair. She was
screaming Mommymommymommy!" (Brooks,
page 67)shirt and its mottled gray flesh was all torn
and pockmarked. It smelled like the beach, like
rotten kelp and salt-water. Aiden jumped up and ran
behind me. Time was out of the chair, standing
between us and that thing. In a split second, it was
like all the lies fell away. Tim look frantically
around the room for a weapon just as it grabbed him
by the shirt
. I heard Jenna scream. I ran to
her room, threw open the door. Another one, big,
Id say six and a half feet with giant
So far, this passage has done the best job of
preying on my fear one of watching the people
I love die in front of me, while fearing for my life
as well. Who would not be horrified by this?
This is almost exactly my nightmare, so little
digging needs to be done to figure our why it would
cause such a reaction in me.
On the more positive side of my reactions, I have
reached a reasonable understanding through some
pensive thought and intelligent discussion (something
the FDA really ought to establish a daily value of, I
think). The greatest reason for my excitement: with
every page of this novel, I am bathing in a Jacuzzi
of delicious prose, such as the above excerpt, and
the passage I pointed to in the opening paragraph.
Surrounded by effective, emotion-evoking words, I am
inspired write this way. People say the best way to
learn a language is to throw yourself into it
move to that country and surround yourself with that
language. Reading a book this rich in good writing
has been equivalent to moving to HappyEnglishLand for
me I have been given a boost in learning the
language of effective writing, and I am ecstatic
about it. That is what this book means to me:
HappyEnglishLand.